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A Beautiful World by ~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards:



It’s a beautiful morning,
With a smile on my face,
The sun shining brightly,
as it travels through space.

What a wonderful feeling,
Standing next to you,
With your hand in mine,
as our hearts beat as one.

What a beautiful morning,
waking up to you.
With that look in your eyes,
That touches my soul.

What beautiful words,
As I say them to you.
The words that you hear,
Are the words of my heart.

What a beautiful world,
with you in mine.
The love that we give,
and the vows that we take.

What a wonderful world
As we make it our own.
My love for you,
Is understood by all.
©2006-2008 ~thingswentbackwards
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You in my World makes it beautiful

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*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Aug 1, 2006, 5:39:50 AM
Aaah...beautiful rythm dear...splendid.

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 5:40:49 AM
thank you i in a weird mood

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*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Aug 1, 2006, 5:44:58 AM
You should be in a weird mood more often, serves to better your timing LOl

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Never underestimate the power of short people in large groups.

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 6:35:32 AM
thanks Im trying

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~ChamelyBanded:iconChamelyBanded: Aug 1, 2006, 9:35:16 AM
Very nice work. ^__^ I find it funny that I always want to help you improve, but by the time I read your poetry, I can never find anything to critique... Must be a good thing. XD;

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 9:48:16 AM
thank you much:)

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~ChamelyBanded:iconChamelyBanded: Aug 1, 2006, 9:55:38 AM
No problem. ^__^

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The Deafening Roar in *Org-infinity

~Aku's Sexy Zexy~
~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 10:30:24 AM
thanks:)

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~Foxangel:iconFoxangel: Aug 1, 2006, 10:41:20 AM
oh wow thats awesome...

it reminds me of my ex and what used to be...

and thats one of the reasons I fav this besides this being an amazing poem. I could imagion stuff in my head when I read that ..

ur an amazing poet I'm gald I put u on my wacthlist ^^

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