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And life flows back by ~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards:



How many times have the strings been pulled?
To be there, to be shown,
Then discarded to the corner
To wait for you to pull
the sting which brings me back to life.
The smile, the pretty face, the paint that hides the streaks
Of the tears that flow when needed no more.
Where did you go when my heart bleeds so?
When the hurt won't stop
and the pain grips my soul.
Crying out to you
no sound is return,
Why can't I cut and run.
Each day I die,
Not knowing why,
I stay here cold and alone,
Till the next time you pull and call out my name.
And life flows back and I come back to life.
Back by your side, for the shortest of time,
Till back to my space, the corner I go.
My home, where the tears do flow.
Till the next time you call out my name,
And life flows back, and I paint up my face,
To hid the track of the tears that had flowed.
©2005-2008 ~thingswentbackwards
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I just want to thank the person who inspired this poem, she knows who she is. (no1important)

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~no1important:iconno1important: Oct 12, 2005, 2:29:45 PM
Like I said... Amazing.

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A Mask Made of Flesh and Thorns

:blackrose: The Fallen :blackrose:
~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Oct 12, 2005, 2:40:48 PM
Thank you, your poems cause me to put into words what I am going though.

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Oct 12, 2005, 7:45:31 PM
Thanks

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~shadedangel:iconshadedangel: Oct 21, 2005, 10:19:16 PM
I really like that...i'm not very good at expressing how much i enjoy peoples works though i am a poet...but this just really touched me...good work...

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I know I have a heart...because it hurts me so...

Love is like war...You may get out alive...but not without some battle scars...
~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Oct 24, 2005, 11:48:38 AM
Thanx :) thank you very much :hug:

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~Paira:iconPaira: Jan 23, 2006, 6:02:35 PM
Wow. I don't really know what to say. ^^; It's beautiful and it's painful. An expression of emotion that runs deep. I love it.

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"Daxter's the brain, Jak's just the muscle."
~Mum
~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Jan 24, 2006, 4:02:22 AM
Thanks read more it starts there the next three tell a story

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~Paira:iconPaira: Jan 24, 2006, 6:10:26 AM
Cool, I will!

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"Daxter's the brain, Jak's just the muscle."
~Mum
~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Jan 24, 2006, 6:16:56 AM
ok thanks I think then you will understand

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*rainygal:iconrainygal: Jan 26, 2006, 5:19:51 AM
Very poignant - excellent expression of your feeligns...:D

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Every artist was first an amateur.
Ralph Waldo Emerson