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Dance with me by ~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards:

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Dance with me in the moonlight’s beams.
Dance with me and hold me close, like so many years before.
Dance with me to the midnight’s song.
Dance to the night bird song.
Dance with me and hold me tight, heal my heartache.
Dance the dance of lovers, the way we use to.
Dance with me, I have traveled far.
Dance with me, and let me remember when.
Dance with me like when we where young.
Dance with me as my eyes go dim.
Dance with me as my heart goes cold,
Dance with me, and then let me go.
Dance with me when we meet next.
Dance with me on moonbeams high.
Dance with me and know I love you so.
©2006-2008 ~thingswentbackwards
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The end of my travels, come dance with me, the end is near.

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*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Aug 1, 2006, 2:52:34 AM
Dance with me, I have traveled far.
Dance with me, and let me remember when.
Dance with me like when we where young.
Dance with me as my eyes go dim.



This, for me, is the best part. Maybe, for the sake of rythm, leave out the "and"? "Dnace with me, let me remember when"?

No offence..

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 3:46:24 AM
non taken and prehapes you are right:)

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*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Aug 1, 2006, 3:49:27 AM
Thank you for not being offended.

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 4:06:45 AM
no problem

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~ChamelyBanded:iconChamelyBanded: Aug 1, 2006, 9:30:00 AM
^__^ This is another amazing piece. I love it.

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 9:48:44 AM
thank you very much

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~ChamelyBanded:iconChamelyBanded: Aug 1, 2006, 9:56:14 AM
You're welcome. ^__^

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The Deafening Roar in *Org-infinity

~Aku's Sexy Zexy~
~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 10:30:05 AM
:) how you been??

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~shattereddreams17:iconshattereddreams17: Aug 1, 2006, 10:32:41 AM
Wow....I love this piece....really good ..
my favorite has to be Dance with me as my eyes go dim, and
Dance with me as my heart goes cold...
Great
:earth:

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Aug 1, 2006, 10:35:48 AM
thank you much, glad you like it ..another one you may enjoy is 'one last dance' its a few poems back..:)

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