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Silent Fears by ~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards:



What a beautiful sound, you, lying next to me,
Early morning, quite, still, but for your breathes.
I lie still, listening.
Head, lying gentle on my chest,
Hair, brown, flowing across my arm.
I fear that I may stir you with my pounding heart.
Full of passion, full of a love that burns deep within me.

Worried still, that I might hurt you,
My passion overwhelming,
You, so fragile.
Eyes,
Moist,
As I look upon you,
Peacefully,
Sleeping.

Unable to express, in word,
the love that I have for you.
Yet, some how,
You understand.

My silent fears,
in the dead of night.

What a beautiful noise,
in the shape of you heart,
beating so strong,
beating so loud.

But what a beautiful sound,
as I fall back to sleep,
a smile upon my face,
and my heart at ease.
©2006-2008 ~thingswentbackwards
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My silent fears and yet a love poem.

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*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Jul 26, 2006, 6:02:05 AM
But what a beautiful sound,
as I fall back to sleep,
a smile upon my face,
and my heart at ease.

:clap:

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Jul 26, 2006, 6:06:17 AM
thanks ...I like that too

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*AdoraBell:iconAdoraBell: Jul 26, 2006, 6:13:25 AM
That part and the second last stanza.

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Never underestimate the power of short people in large groups.

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~alice-of-wounderland:iconalice-of-wounderland: Jul 26, 2006, 7:22:52 AM
So beautiful...

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Jul 26, 2006, 7:32:02 AM
thank you very much and disregard my last question

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Jul 26, 2006, 7:37:24 AM
me to my fav also

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~bitter-sweet-victory:iconbitter-sweet-victory: Jul 26, 2006, 9:36:04 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!

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~jeannie64:iconjeannie64: Jul 26, 2006, 9:57:12 AM
hey brilliant writting will be watching if thats ok xj

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~jeannie64
~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Jul 26, 2006, 10:07:47 AM
that would be wonderful, thank you:)

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~thingswentbackwards:iconthingswentbackwards: Jul 26, 2006, 10:08:50 AM
so I take it you like?

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